|Reviews for I thought of your love last night|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
I love your use of title/summary. When I read them, I thought the sea image would be used in a positive light, so the actual content of the piece caught me completely by surprise. The awareness you have of your audience always astounds me.
[it made me sick.] Great line. Such powerful words.
[sea at the edge of a/lifeless sand dune where/only wild roams.] I love that image. Sort of like the sand dunes are a barrier between this wild kind of love and the good, pure kind of love. On the literal level of the image, I've always thought of dunes as barriers myself, but I've never thought about it too much or extended it this far. I always love when poetry makes me see something ordinary in a completely new way.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
| sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
I love the directness, word-choice, and simplicity. It's got bite and you have a very strong voice.