|Reviews for House of The Rising Sun|
| this wild abyss chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
I liked the vague foreshadowing here because it gaves clues to the future plot without giving things away entirely. I did think that the sentence and paragraph structures were a little unvaried and that this could have used some description, because the piece as a whole read more like a list of short, choppy phrases rather than a narrative, something that really impeded the flow.
| Bryanna Bee chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
What a promising start :)