|Reviews for Penance|
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
after the lettuce leaf part i pictured a rabbit which then got interested in the ways of wild dogs
| hecountedstars chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
parts of this absolutely shatter me. "throwing up every last lettuce leaf to fit into her shadow." i love words like this in a kind of sick way. also really like the capitalization in the dialogue. favorited!