Reviews for Jealousy
DuCkIeFiShIe96 chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
That is really deep. Nice writing! :)
Loqwell chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
These felt like lyrics to me, but I think it works rather nicely that way. With this in mind, I especially liked the parallels you drew with the first and last stanzas. :]