Power is gone and the lap top not a desk top just goes out?
They go up coz its cold but a window is open on a cold cloudy day?
What darkness as he explained? What about the red glow from the fire place which was bright enough to read from?
Crackling electrical fire place?

how did he switch on an electrical fire place when there was no electricity?

Loving it so far.

seriously dude you need to finish this story! good luck

whoa! he went from cold and mad at her, to caring about her in what... 30 seconds. great chapter. i love his conflicting emotions! update soon!

i love the story so far. Dont stop writing. Please continue with the story. For your first time its really great. Hope u update

Hey, you kind of posted the first chapter twice. Just letting you know! I am so interested in what will happen at his house XD

Emily.

Ooh, not bad! I love blonde bad-ass hotties!

I'm pretty excited for the next chapter, so write quick :)

-Dark.

Oh he's such a jerk! I would have denied being red to the death! Lol I do ill deny it till the acuser gives up haha anyway update this soon seems like it has great potential...so. .. Now that you I'm waiting...you gotta update faster!