|Reviews for At the end of the day|
| Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
So very true its as if this poem is from my own heart for despite no longer loving girls it had been her laugh, her smile which had captivated me in the 1st place.
| Iva Hartnet chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Very very nice! I read it like a poem! It had the feel of a poem :) There are a couple of glitches though: 'creases' instead of what 'ceases'... But loved it! :D
You left me wishing you'd written more!
| Poisoned Twinkles chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
You can't just fight love, no?
I have to say this is pretty short but the feelings and description are extreme. I guess that's because they're compressed in three lines. Three tasteful lines. *shiver*
Good job :)