You should repost at the beginning or in the summary that this is just a teaser. It's a bit rude otherwise.

Blahblah. It's obviously quite good and interesting and you know this or you wouldn't have published.

Amazing amazing story! I don't understand how you can come up with all these amazing ideas! I wasn't so fond of the story when it started, but the ending more than made up for it. I love how you dragged the climax out into a bunch of chapters. I haven't figured out how to do that... actually I've never finished a story. I'm rambling now, so I'll just shut up
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Taerah xXx

Awesome story

*screams*
OH MY GOSH THIS WAS AMAZING! This story was unbelieveably awesome! I loved it SO much! Ebony is an amazing main character, and the pace of the action towards then end was so quick I found myself fairly FLYING through the paragraphs trying to catch up! Harry is one heck of a character, and I can't WAIT to read books two and three!

I JUST HAPPENED UPON THIS STORY AND I'M SO GLAD I DID! IT WAS WONDERFUL. FUNNY, ROMANTIC AND JUST A GREAT READ. I LAUGHED SO HARD MY COUGHING STARTED AGAIN BUT I DIDN'T CARE HER OUTFITS WHEN SHE WAS JUST HUMAN HAD ME CHOKING FROM LAUGHING SO HARD! I LOVE THE FLOW OF YOUR WRITING STYLE! THANK YOU FOR THIS AMAZING AND DELIGHTFUL TALE. I LOVE EBONY AND NATE, THEY JUST FIT SO WELL TOGETHER! EVERYONE SHOULD READ THIS STORY, IT IS MAGIC!

Oh my. Really do love your writing style, it flows very well and I can translate you're writing very easily into images in my mind! So far this story has made me chuckle quite a lot, I'm really enjoying the banter between the characters, espcially Nate and Ebony! I love how quick they are with each other it really does put a smile on my face when I'm reading. I'm glad to see you're going to self publish! I very was distraught when I clicked next chapter to find a dead link, I'd really like to continue reading more, so if possible I'd love have copy of the doc! (also as an illustrator I couldn't help having a go at doing a sketch of Ebony. Figured I might aswell draw her in her current state of dress from where I am in the story! :D I'm quite tempted to scan and colour it, hope you like! photos/56785211 N03/6792892443 )

This is such a cute story! I especially love the pitch which is a breath of fresh air compared to all of the werewolf/vampire stories going around! I look forward to reading more of your work! )

I actually love this chapter! I'm so proud of Ebony for finally realizing her true self!

I still adore your writing style, although I feel that the analogies/similies are used a bit too frequently. However, I am so impressed with your plotline and character developments, especially Nate- I didn't see the knight aspect coming in an it was really fitting for the plot and Ebony. I LOVE HARRY!

thank you again for writing so well and I am definately reading the sequels... please tell me it's a plural?

Can I just say how much I love your story? It's so original and different. You took a common supernatural topic and turned it into something so amazing! Witches are so interesting and you put everything that they represent into Ebony Bell :] I didn't really see the Knights of the Round Table coming into the story, but it's because I never thought of them as how you made them out to be. Nate is fantastic! It's refreshing to see someone actually give their characters as much depth that you will always be my favorite if only for the word 'blasting' :D You seriously know how to write. You're one of the stories that I read and wonder how the hell you haven't gotten a thousand more reviews.

I was sad to see the story end but loved every chapter! you are talented. can you review me story. Forms of Magic, Book One River Rock

So... I finished.

And I'm most definitely going to have to read the next one.

I really enjoyed your writing, and the perspective it was in.

~YoungAndLiving

Fantastic.

Amazing writing.

I need to finish.

Now.

Did I mention I loved it?

Was this story planned as a stand alone? It's good, very good. I will say however, that should you ever decide to carry it on, I wouldn't be one to complain ;)

Take care!

WHY DOES THIS SAY COMPLETE?

I have decided through much deliberation; that you are mean.