awwwnn.. loved it soo much u remind of SEX NOT LOVE MAKING.. loved it too.. I'll advice u to read it... again cool story

Loved it~! XD

My goodness, this was... AMAZING! aaah, I've been searching for a good read on fp for ages now, and finally I stumpled upon yours. Forbidden love, is the best, isn't it? :)

Sure, it's a cliche, but a damn good one and I looove fluffy cliches.. especially with a little smut thrown in the mix :)
Anyways... You, my friend, are a very good writer - your decription and dialogue is perfect - and your humour is right up my alley.

I'm defenitely checking out your other story :)

Really enjoyed this :D

You really should be ashamed of yourself. Who in her right mind would have sex when the other one is drunk? She can't blame Darren alone because it was her fault too. And did she expect?

I love it...although very mature i still lav it. you should consider publishing ur books cause they are amazing

Bryony is pathetic :(

still love it

So good it made me cry...

This story was incredible! I loved it. They are such an incredible couple. But Darren got me mad so many times. It was so sad when he didn't even try to stop her from leaving that I started crying along with her. When Matt went into protective brother mode, I was so happy. I loved the ending! Thanks!

whoa.. darren is such an ass. He took it and said he couldn't do it? whoaa... he has no gut telling his best friend that he love his sister? Whoaaa..

dis was awesum i am always d one who loves reading best friend bro falling to d girl i get d feel of warmness sigh i dnt have a brother though :( GOOD stry :)

That was so sweet! I wish someone loved me like tht :( .. but this story was just awesome! :-)

Aww it was cuteee! I loved matt when he went to go beat up darren. I think the story fit well together bringing everything back in a circle.

Love the story!
*Ngoc1231*

Absolutely loved it!