Reviews for Can You Just Kiss Me Now?
je-kay24 chapter 3 . 5/18/2011
A fine mixture of sexy fluffiness. Loved it :)
Sabreal chapter 3 . 5/17/2011
"Because any girl would be a fool to pass up a movie that starred Gerard Butler."

Lol, guess I'm a fool then Because I HAVE passed, and WILL pass up any more movies he's been in, unless someone recommends something utterly brilliant he's been in. I'm not familiar with his works. But those first 20 mins of The Bounty Hounter were the most hellish on Earth (before I clicked the Exit button) XD

Your story has a certain je nais se quoi (sp?) as fluff stories usually do. Their age gap is only 5 years...I can totally deal with that, and it's not like they did the nasty when she was 11 or something. Now THAT'S what I call under-age

It was cliched, but totally heart-warming, and it afforded me a few chuckles as well.

Sheepthief chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Alright me again.. I just discovered that you based Darren off Darren Criss and I have to tell you this is AWESOME because I love Starkid :D Now I love this story even more. :D
Sheepthief chapter 3 . 5/4/2011
Aww this story is beautiful... sometimes I thought: "stupid boy you can't hurt her AGAIN" but in the end it turned out so beautiful :) i love the ending!

P.S: "Because any girl would be a fool to pass up a movie that starred Gerard Butler." This is possibly the most true sentence I read in a long long while :D
coolblue26 chapter 3 . 4/20/2011
cliche and yet not... I love it... very sort of realistic... great story!
BeBzY chapter 3 . 4/16/2011
:D naw what puke worthy ending :) in a good way...
ElizabethMK99 chapter 3 . 4/14/2011
absolutely loved it! enough said :D
EasilyDamaged chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
Oh I love this. How you managed to make me fall so hard for Darren and Bryony in a matter of three chapters, I have no idea. But wow, I found myself wishing it wasn't just a "one shot" but chapters and chapters of their amazingness. This story was amazing.
InnocentSarcasm chapter 3 . 4/7/2011

thats what I said when I

finished reading it . I've been reading a WHOLE lot on FP and drama is not what I like i didn't find any mistakes

plus NO drama is ALWAYS a plus

do write more of these please
Ana3498 chapter 3 . 4/6/2011
Ah that was amazing i loved the ending :) absolutely loved the story :)
Ana3498 chapter 2 . 4/6/2011
you know, i should be doing homework, but i cant stop readin! im logging back in just to favorite this story ;) LOVED EVERY SENTENCE!
Ana3498 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
AMAZING! and sorry, that my username, i just dont feel like logging in :/
Guest chapter 3 . 4/3/2011
very nicely developed in just three chapters. excellent work. do keep it up.
yunique chapter 3 . 3/31/2011
ahh this was too cute :)

love it!
throwingstars chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
okay, im not actually done reading this yet and i will review again when i'm done but i just had to comment on this right away- Why? Because you obviously used Darren Criss as a basis for Darren McFadden and I love it.

I just read the part about him being half Filippino and half Irish and I was like "wait a minute... half Filippino and half Irish AND he's named Darren?" So I went to your profile and sure enough the character picture is Darren Criss.

I just had to comment on that part because I'm a huge Starkid fan and I don't think I've ever actually seen anything Darren Criss related posted on FP before.
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