Please continue

Damn, almost three years since an update. Woe is me. XD Should have checked before I submerged myself in this story.

::sob::
It's not finished. Probably too long since last update but... If I beg will you continue? :)

Loving it so far!

Quick note: I believe "curve" should be "curb"?

I haven't been able to curve these childish burst of memory driven emotion.

Please update. I love this story and am curious as to how you will go about continuing this story. Please update. I've re-read this story many times.

I really like this story - are you going to complete it?

Enjoyed it

Ohhh i just adore this story update soon :D

This is so lovingly twisted c: lol i like it

Hope that Phoenix can "fix" Dalton. I think he's more damaged than he fully realizes (and that Phoenix is faaaar far darker than he realizes) and hopefully Phoenix can use his evil manipulative powers for good, teach Dalton to use his powers for the same, and Dalton can be happy again :)

Hey! I just stumbled across your story and read it all the way through in one sitting. It's very very good! I'm loving it! Dalton is a very intriguing character... I can't wait to learn more about the inside of his brain! I would like more about Pheonix though... I mean, how much is he actually taken in by Dalton despite knowing about his "toys" etc? Please update soon! :)

I'm not sure if I should review, because it might hurt your feelings, but I'll be honest, okay? :)

Firstly, this story is very properly written, but it is dull. I think what I dislike most about it is that it's written in first person. Sure, it's interesting to see the world from the perspective of a person who has ASPD, but it does not necessarily make a story good to read (note that I didn't say "good read"). Also, it gets just a little repetitive.

Having a personality as Dalton does makes him all the more an "unreliable narrator", especially since he bases nearly everything on sequences (personally, main characters who think they know everything, all the time, and are portrayed in first person piss me off) and that makes everything he thinks and the views he has biased or skewed in some way.

That said, I don't mind "unreliable narrators" (intentional or not) so long as they are modest, because it at least places a seed of trust in the reader's mind. Right now, all we know is that Dalton likes sex, is extremely manipulative, and very proud - so we don't trust his thoughts / views at all.

If you update, I'll keep reading.

All the best c:

I find this story intriguing. Keep up the good work!

Ermagawd. This is possibly- no wait, certainly the best story I've read on fictionpress for a whole. For realsies. The depth of your characters' emotions and feelings, their reactions and the characterisations are absolutely, positively breath-taking. I feel like I can just crawl inside Dalton's mind and stay there all day, hearing his observations and just viewing the world through his eyes. You've made these wonderfully complex characters that I can relate to on a soul-deep level and it's just so beautiful. Thank you for writing this.

Please. Please upload. This story is amazing. I love it all! Dalton is absolutely great. I like his persona.
I know you haven't updated in a while and I'm hoping you will continue to do so and not abandon this story.