I feel this is a series of one shot poetry and not a story at all. about a darker twisted take on clichés, very creepy and sick. me likely.

I actually enjoyed these... :0 Is that bad ? :(

I love this so much.

I like this a bit.

Why can't the female guy in the relationship be the evil, bad one?

This is my favorite. It's so beautiful and original that I read it again and again.

Capitalize the word "death".

How interesting. (Not being sarcastic.)

this is so wicked. very clever...putting a dark spin on cliches.

Now these are my kind of one-shots.. especially when I'm listening to Radiohead ;)

-Chester.

i was confuse the first time i read it. then i read it again to understand. did he actually killed the girl? O_o the start was great! maybe u should add a little more details about this. :)

So he KILLED her? This story is actually a bit confusing...maybe you can re-write it with some more details? I really like the idea of this story.

WOAH. SURPRISE!

I like it.