|Reviews for Breaking|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I didn't like this as much as your other pieces. You always have something quirky and original to your writing, but, while this was good, there wasn't anything entirely new; it relied on a lot of common images.
I did like the last line, though. A great change of tone, especially so suddenly, and a lot of bitter irony to it.
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| Poisoned Twinkles chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Love the irony. Share it some more, will you? ;)