I didn't like this as much as your other pieces. You always have something quirky and original to your writing, but, while this was good, there wasn't anything entirely new; it relied on a lot of common images.

I did like the last line, though. A great change of tone, especially so suddenly, and a lot of bitter irony to it.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

Love the irony. Share it some more, will you? ;)

Yours,

Poisoned T.