Reviews for Oxymoronism
WhyCan'tIComeUpWithOne chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
*shrug* Not too bad, Haiku's are hard to write. Good Luck.
lymli chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
I like the ending, sometimes freedom isn't like seem.
Thenardier chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Other than the fact that your first sentence is lacking a syllable, I would say that this is a really good first attempt. It flows beautifully and I feel that there is a rather cheeky tone present, which I really loved.
Poisoned Twinkles chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I do like your usage of oxymorons, but in my opinion, the second one (clean dusty road) did not make much sense to me. Well, actually, it did make sense to me; it's just that I thought the two words (clean dusty) could've been used better.

Nevertheless, I like your haiku very much. I even found it a bit funny for some reason


Poisoned T.