Reviews for Triple Vindication
Joe chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I think this is a really good start, although there are areas where you could improve. Within your first paragraph paragraph it would read more flutently if you were to put 'Hey, there's nothing wrong with familiarity, right? Unfortunately, today, nothing is going as planned. It's seven fifty and your sitting in your car; a beaten up Volkswagen. You start to panic but with a deep sigh you calm and become composed. You start to focus on your destination and glance at the clock within your car. Your late.'