|Reviews for Delivered Straight to Your Door|
| leSaINNe chapter 18 . 12/9/2013
I actually love this chapter and the way u write jxd overall.I love the 'physicsyness' of it and I think there was the right amount of feeling and actions, making it realistic of what they were doing. You're a good smut writer and a lot better than some of what I've read .
| Kirihime chapter 19 . 10/13/2013
Omg! Jason is crazy. This was certainly different and sort of exciting. I liked it.
| G chapter 19 . 9/18/2013
Refreshing, fun, sexy, laugh out loud, good.
| Preposterous chapter 19 . 7/8/2013
I found the epilogue super sweet and sexy despite the fact that Jason is a horny geezer. Well, the horny part was expected. But anyway, this story was awesome. Read it in one sitting and after this.I'm going to read it again and again.
| Preposterous chapter 16 . 7/8/2013
I like this chapter. It really shows where drew is emotionally, which isn't wuite as obvious as Jason's emotions. I went back last chapter and saw the part about it being an extra brw.
| Preposterous chapter 15 . 7/8/2013
To he honest, this chapter was very confusing. But all the other chapters were so good that I almost forgot to comment to show my love. This is one of the most unique stories I've read in both style and plot. Thanks for writing!
| smashthat chapter 19 . 6/10/2013
That was a strange story. Strange in a good way though. Lso I thought it was funny. Great work!
| semantics chapter 19 . 6/10/2013
Your style of writing was very interesting, although it did get a bit hard to read at times when it was only dialogue. The story was unique and funny nonetheless and I really enjoyed it. It was cute and sweet without being too graphic, and I loved how you wrote about their relationship as a long courting process.
The epilogue was even better; it was nice of you to tie everything together with a cute bow :) Their world seems idyllic. Beautifully crafted and a great feel-good story to read.
| bonky jo chapter 19 . 6/1/2013
Haha this was hilarious and cute! I'm not used to soo much dialogue, but for this story it just worked! And I guess I'm really slow b/c it took me awhile to realize "…" meant the other character said nothing. I think I need to go back and re-read b/c I probably confused who said what.
Lol but anyways really loved it. I read all your AN's and I think your sex scene was great, it may not have been smutty but definitely not mechanical or awkward. U should try and write some smuttier scenes tho in the future ;-) lol I bet you can do it!
| ImmanenceEnsured chapter 19 . 12/12/2012
This story made me smile way too many times:) Awesome job
| ImmanenceEnsured chapter 3 . 12/11/2012
"Jason was scheming. He was plotting. At that moment, if he owned a pet, it would be a White Persian.
-and he'd be stroking it sinisterly."
Every single line in this story just WORKS! You have such a lively imagination, and the way you describe things is amazing, few words but you convey the exact right image. I'm totally excited to see where this is going.
| Laser Panties chapter 15 . 11/27/2012
This...this is more confusing than ...
| Aynon chapter 18 . 11/26/2012
I thought this was a great comedy, well paced, especially loved the first half where it was pure dialogue. I think there were two things that stood out to me:
1. When the same person continued speaking in the next sentence, I think the punctuation was wrong (although I might have mistaken who said what). The proper punctuation would be:
"Jason talks some more"
"Now Drew talks"
2. The shift from dialogue to actions was a little jarring.
Apart from that, I really loved this story. It was very light and humorous, and I really appreciated how you didn't require descriptions of emotions to show the actual emotions. I also loved how the simple dialogue could show so much about what was happening. Good work!
| Life's Unexpected Turns chapter 19 . 11/9/2012
They are such a sweet couple! And your work is amazing! So adorable. Have you ever read the series Howl's Moving Castle by Dianna Wynne-Jones? To me, Jason and Andrew remind me of Howl and Sophie. Pay me no mind if you haven't read it. Amazing story! Great job :)
| xSadistxFujix chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
...I don't even know what to say except omfg. -falls over laughing- THIS IS BRILLIANT! Work of pure genius.