Reviews for these bare walls
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
"i get lost/ in the sleep/ i missed;" that line is - i can't even. i mean, it's perfect
LovelySocks chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Ooh...very haunting. I like the way it flows, with one stanza easily transitioning into another, though there still pretty distinct. Very deep. Personally, my favorite part is "in the time when your eyelashes brushed over my skin." Well done.
Ivy Climbroe chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
This is really good! I love your discriptions, they really make you think, amazing!
a theoretic revolution chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
gorgeous. the 2nd & 4th stanzas are my favorites,
Archia chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I enjoyed the description in this. My favourite line would have to be the last, I love everything that it holds.
pulses can drive from here chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
very nice. the lonliness of this man, or woman, is perfectly pictured - i liked the analogy of the walls and windows knowing what had gone on. i'd say grade a, personally. no, a.
limpwrist chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Beautiful, parts of this make me really sad. Feels like a hole. Guess that's a good thing, that your words have that kind of power
speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
amazing imagery. it would be terrifying to sit in a room of such memories i think..

very well done.