Reviews for Days With Desmond |
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![]() ![]() I'm confused :s wasn't Michelle pregnant...? And they had already gone to Tennessee? :o |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yaaayy! I loved this chapter! It was great. I'm confused on what Casey's motives are.. I guess we'll figure out. Well done (: xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() your doing an amazing job on this story and i am so hoping that Desmond doesn't die and that he gets to see his babies and also that him and Michelle get to get married but can't wait to see what you have planned for this story so update soon |
![]() ![]() This is I-am-happy. I'm just to lazy to log in. So, where to begin? First, the chapter seemed short and REALLY fillerish. I understand that you may need to get back into it, but it seemed kind of pointless. I can't wait for more, nonetheless! Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Something tells me Michelle is only fooling herself. I hope she doesn't break it off with Desmond. Glad to see you updated this. Can't wait to read more. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely love this story, i hate casey -.- and megan's a bitch if it isnt obvious lol. anyways, pwease update soon! |
![]() ![]() Oh I really hope you don't kill off Desmond! Please don't! Whatever you do, don't make him die! He has to see his babies grow up! :( I don't care about that other guy! He's lame! So don't do it! I'm totally in love with Desmond! He's so adorable! I seriously am pleading and begging of you, don't let him die of the cancer! :( Save him, and this story, before it's too late! So, I just started to read whole... (Series? IDK what to call it.) and I am totally hooked! I finished The Guide For Guys like 4 days ago and now I just finished what you have for this sequel, and I gotta say that I am so stoked for the rest! Even though I know you haven't updated in a while, and people might have lost a little interest, I'm sure it'll all start back up once you've updated again! :D Again I stress: PLEASE DON'T KILL/LET DESMOND DIE. I couldn't bear it! And neither could Michelle! :( ...And though, yes, this is your book, just... please. Please don't. Not a good idea. :( You are an astounding writer, I'd hate to see you mess that up because you kill off the main character. It's on the list of terrible mistakes writers make. Like with Suzanne Collins when she messed with Peeta's head with the injections of Tracker Jacker venom. Not smart. Any indication as to why everyone hated Mockingjay? Yeah, you should never, EVER, mess with the main characters. It tends to piss people off, and make them hate you. It's a mistake. So please. Just don't make it. Not trying to attack you or anything, I honestly like you, your writing, and your story, but I just thought you aught to know that it will be your downfall if you kill Demond off. Loves from Maddie :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to update now that it's summer?(: i've been reading this story since last october and i really like it(: i hope you update(:(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and really encourage you to continue writting this. I have a question, when Desmond applied for the job, did he write none under medical conditions? If you ever need some help for editing, you can email me. I hope it will help you with balancing out schoolwork, ect. Lili and RayRay \( • )/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's ok I understand. I'd love it if you oculd find time in the summer to continue, because I love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honey, don't be stressed and take it easily. Please take your time and no rush at all. I am look forward to read your story whenever you have time and take care :) xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there. I love it and its amazing chapter. I want more. Please update soon. Can't wait for it. Also can you check it out my new story whenever you have time please? And thanks Also happy new year to you too. Take care :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww i understand and take your time. No rush at all :) |