|Reviews for Margarita, the cat, and the coming of Spring|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
I didn't really like the punctuation 'cause you had it as one long sentence which it is not.
The title kinda confused me as first 'cause I read it at first as Margarita, the cat... lol.
I liked the descriptions in the first stanza. I also thought the image of the girl sitting there was really great and how you described dawn as a time we make believe was great.
I like how you interpreted the cat's sigh though I didn't get what humor you were referring to since nothing you had said so far seemed humorous.
I liked your imaginary love it goes back to the make believe and you tied it into real life with rain in march.
The ending was great too.
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| lymli chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
this made me think bout some kind of ritual, maybe cos there's was ritual word, XD I liked it.
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
you are so descriptive and your language speaks wonders to me as persuasion and loudness, with clarity and intimacy. you are constantly fulfilling some deep thirst in me for novelty and ingenuity.