Reviews for Incision |
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![]() ![]() ![]() WIt I'm confused are Anna and kale dating? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was so disappointed I don't understand how she could feel that way about Xander and she wasn't even that upset that he killed her best friend it shocks me a lot I wanted to pull her out of the story and physically knock some sense into her! |
![]() ![]() it was a weird story but guess what i like weird keep writing |
![]() ![]() Oh god.. It started out so good and ended up so bad. Its not tt I don't like dark stories, but this is sunshine given a dark twist to look deep. I really hate how Anna could love someone who killed her best friend. It's just not logical unless she is mad too |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say that this is the wost ending I have her read out of all the fanfictions and fictionpress I have read this is the worst. Tv story was just amazing and written pretty good. I always liked kaleb from the begining. He was always with her and it semed like they had this close bond that could turn into something better. Then we met xander and he was pretty cool at firs but then I realized how much of a stalker he was. This guy was just CREEPY. The way he talked about the two of them like they had known eachother since forever. I think it was infatuation at first sight. And the knife? We never even found out what happened at his old school because I definetly think that he has mental issues that need to be resolved. Then in tv end Anna thinks she loves him even after he killed her best friend? What kind of person does that! Literly not two seconds after he kills kaleb anna thinks she is in loves with him and tottaly forgets about kaleb. Quite frankly I didn't think either of them were right for her. But then again I didn't like anna in the end. Great story though it really sent me through lots of emotions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is about to get real awkward real fast and I want to read it real soon so you should update:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story! i like Kaleb but i think shes doing it for the wrong reasons, i also love Xander. Great story. Somewhere you put anyways its actually anyway just so you know. Love it cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() I seriously love this story! Keep writing :D 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() yayayayay! update soon! go kanna! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, im sad that i didnt get to read the original ;( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it, even the ending. I did NOT like that Xander got taken away though. I was checking through the 'completed' stories and when I came across Incision I got so engrossed in it that I forgot it was completed! Now I feel stupid and I support a sequel 100%! So yes, please make a sequel. I haven't checked your author's page to see whether or not it's been started yet, but I will soon. This was an awesome story. For a second, I wasn't sure if Xander was some kind of supernatural being - just from the way he was acting and his description. Either way, it was just awesome. Cheers and good luck with the sequel! ~Honestly I Promise You~ |
![]() ![]() i really liked the story...DID not like the end...i don't mind that kaleb died...but i don't like how anna still loved XANDER...feels like kalebs death was a waste...but other than that i really liked the story...and i hope you don't stop your sequel... |
![]() ![]() Wow. I seriously don't know whether I liked the story or not. Personally, from my own interpretation of the story, I did not like Anna or Xander. Xander was just plain freaky, and Anna was just mean. Why would she string along two guys who liked her. I'm not sure if I would read the sequel. I have no idea what it would involve. But nevertheless, good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude, Anna is stupid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. This story is seriously not what I was expecting. It was very interesting though! I'm not a fan of the ending, particularly because I was rooting for Kaleb but since you're the author, you have the freedom to choose however you want to end the story. I just hoped that you were able to give more depth in terms of Xander's character. He's interesting but he is a bit scary because all I can say about him is his good looks, vain (and a bit obnoxious) personality, and his stalker-like tendencies. His relationship with Anna was not as realistic compared with Anna's and Kaleb's relationship. It seemed shallow because it somehow did not go beyond the "physical" level. I agree with many of the people who commented though, you have to make a sequel. I'm excited for it! |