Reviews for Puppet is Dead
crocodile chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
this is one of those bits of writing that i could spend hours analyzing and still come up with new interpretations. i really like the repetition of the phrase "And God stood there"; religion is so touchy and personal. also the structure of this is neat - i like the fragmentation and all.
The Folk Extraction chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Poor puppet :(

I like how this poem is very moment by moment and the free form works really well for it. I really enjoyed reading this.