This was very good. The line "Just like the eyeliner that I'm sure constantly runs down your cheeks" presented beautifully sad immagery. Great job. Your friend is lucky to have a good friend like you(:

Loved the end. And sorry im not reading some of ur longer stories but i dont read horror

the imagery is cool :) kind of dark, but it's hard to forgive some friend who deceived ya.

When we all thought you couldn't tell us your feelings, and thought you were never going to, you prove us all wrong with this amazing and beautiful poem. Thank You

A lot of dark internal turmoil twisted together until it made something breathtaking. Amazing.