Reviews for Boomerang
n chapter 17 . 11/14/2011
Next chapter please! I love Nichole. She's so cute.
Jensi chapter 17 . 11/9/2011
Hmmm...interesting conversation but such the wrong person to have it with! I wonder where that will lead.

Great chapter!
Princess97 chapter 16 . 10/22/2011
I love the story and emotion so far. Keep it up! Are you in a drama club or something? I was gonna say Broadway star but then i realized this is fiction.
Jensi chapter 16 . 10/20/2011
I still need to do this to my mom. :) Good chapter! She must feel so great doing this and moving beyond her mother, and I wonder how it will affect everything else in her life. I hope that she and Sookie are okay after all of this, and I hope that she finds closure elsewhere. Update soon!
chewychester chapter 16 . 10/20/2011
That was a load of your chest. I hope she really does "fly."
chewychester chapter 15 . 10/14/2011
I hope Joseph is her best friend that she is thinking of. ;P
Jensi chapter 15 . 10/14/2011
I despise her mother so much! Go home, girl. That place will smother you to death.

Good job. :)
Jensi chapter 13 . 9/27/2011
Saved by the friend...is her name Sookie for any particular reason? ;-) Are you a fan of a TV show perhaps? That could have gone a bit further than she planned had that door not opened. I was all into it and kind of relieved a little, or not.

I miss my boomerang. :(

Great job!
chewychester chapter 13 . 9/27/2011
GReat chapter. I loved all of Joseph's body language and her mind was whirling at 100 mph. I can't wait for another chapter!
Casperaselle chapter 12 . 9/24/2011
Great story! I'm obsessed with Stephanie Mitchell. And I feel like I'm in a hanging position. Please, continue writing. Can't wait to read the next chapters! God bless! :)
chewychester chapter 12 . 9/22/2011
I love it when the look makes you feel like it is the first time. Aww
NorthernDownpour95 chapter 12 . 9/22/2011
Brilliant!
Jensi chapter 12 . 9/22/2011
Good for her on calling him out about Nichole knowing or not knowing he was there, despite the fact he really didn't answer. A lot of girls would have gone into that situation a bit differently, and she was strong about it. I am curious to know what happens next. Good job!
Jensi chapter 11 . 8/3/2011
I dig the paramore references in this story! Guilty pleasure. :) Cute story and one many of us can relate to, and I am enjoying it. Good job!
Krazy Kaisy chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
The Prologue was very good. It kind of told me what was going on. One big issue is that some of the sentences didn't make sense. It was obvious that you didn't proof read it yourself or have someone do it for you. You should really try to proof read every chapter. Some people don't like reading stories that they have to correct grammar. For example,

"The weeks passed by slowly. I kept waiting for that'good morning, i love you' text message, but it ever came."

It should say " but it never came" not "but it ever came"

(First sentence of last paragraph)

So from now on, try to be more careful when you type. And always proof read.
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