Reviews for The Boy Next Door |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was a really cute story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome sauce! Please, please write a sequel for this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is especially painful to like someone without the means of getting that person to notice you. This is a nice story, though I would have liked it if it were a little more developed... perhaps a second story from his POV? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. GOD! This story is AMAZING! You have to write more! Please, please, PLEASE! I LOVE it! D P.S. If you would, will you please Read and Review my story? I'm new to fictionpress, and I just posted the preface to my story. . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() definitly more of the same in more chappys |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this was really cute! My only complaint is that it was so short. :) Any plans to expand it? What about her made him not notice him? Why did he choose to go with a letter as opposed to just talking to her face-to-face? There's a lot you could do with this if you wanted to extend it or turn it into a longer piece. Great job. :) |