|Reviews for Capital letters|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Wow, such a creative idea! It's a personal pet peeve of mine when every line of a poem starts with capitol letters for no reason, but geeze, you just beat the crap out of that XD How do you come up with such wonderful ideas?
["I won't always have to be
a part of it."] I didn't entirely understand this, which was disappointing because it was right at the dead center of the piece. A part of what, exactly?
The last stanza, though-such a great metaphor! I was confused with the line "Which I think knows/More about love then I/Ever will" (oh, just noticed: then than), but this clarifies it so perfectly. One of the most unusual love metaphors I've ever seen, but you execute it to perfection.
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| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
I like your writing style. It's got a lovely flow, and the minimalism of this piece results in such interesting statements. Kind of mysterious, in a good way.