Reviews for Writing Challenge Contest Entries
Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
I like how the cold practicality of this stabs straight to the point. Nice and brief.

Good job and good luck in WCC!
Nesasio chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
I like how to the point this is. It doesn't explicitly say it, of course, but you know exactly what it's talking about. I think the frank/basic listing of these things really works for the topic: you get the idea that whoever's listing this is nonchalant about torturing someone, to the point where the process of getting ready is much like a trip to the grocery store. Quite eerie!

Nice work and good luck in the WCC!
this wild abyss chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
I thought the sparseness of this piece was interesting. The list-like format was interesting, and the meaning was readily obvious. Not really my favourite style, but I liked it all the same.

Best of luck in the WCC!