|Reviews for When in Rome
| Yjofna chapter 24 . 5/19/2016
This is a great work here. And to know that you did so many research for this folds its worth three times. So many patience, so many talent and so many love for writing here, it is purely encouraging. Thank you for this!
| mgaa chapter 24 . 4/14/2016
you dang near crushed me with heartache...(sniffles)...so I'm not thanking you for this wonderful story..(sniffles) but I'm favoriting so yeah
| Weeds-Are-Growing chapter 24 . 3/29/2016
Have to say that not that many stories move me but this one was probably one of the best pieces I've read yet. You have real talent, and I wish that I could just read Crispin and Kate's story until I tire of them (although that would probably defeat the whole purpose.) I cried like a baby and usually I'm made of stone while faced with sensitive subjects. Thank you for writing such an amazing story that can give just about anyone a sense of hope and content. :)
| 13tempest chapter 24 . 3/27/2016
I know it has been many years since this story ended, but I cannot help bu say this:
Wow. What a joy it was to read this story! You really are talented, I'll say. This was such a good story that made me relax a bit before my exams. Though if it didn't have a happy ending, I would probably fail them. So I took a huge risk, then. It was worth it, though.
| Roxasfleur chapter 24 . 2/6/2016
I wanna see crispin's reaction to everything in the future
| Old fragrance chapter 19 . 12/23/2015
I like your book very much. But i think the all instant learning langage thing by aphrodite wasn't such a good idea. I know it's convenient, but it kind of breaks the rythm and the interaction between the characters, making it a bit... plain. And I'm losing interest...
It 's such a shame because i was really enthralled till then. It's original, well constructed, and well written. You did a lot of research and it's really coherent and interesting.
I hope you keep on writing, you've got a real talent at it.
(I apologize for any mistakes in spelling or grammar, english is not my native langage)
| Strange dawn chapter 24 . 12/16/2015
This was great. I cried through the last few chapters, but it was worth it! Would love an epilogue of them as a family or you know maybe just them screwing around. Either one. XX
| voidxtiles chapter 24 . 12/13/2015
I'm grinning so hard my cheeks hurt
| geeyeahyeah chapter 24 . 11/23/2015
I really enjoyed that!
| seasprite15 chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
I read this story a couple months ago, had to come back and give a review. This story was amazing and addicting. Thank you! 3
| Guest chapter 24 . 11/3/2015
Really really wow
| somersaultkick chapter 24 . 10/30/2015
Fate is kind. Gosh, I, as a mere mortal who can't decipher the depths of trouble it would create from altering destiny, think Fate is kind enough to allow them to have a relationship. I love this story! It is refreshing and a sort of telepathy with gods and godesses is amazingly done.
| TheClosetWriter16 chapter 24 . 9/16/2015
Hi! I have just finished reading this story and it's fantastic! I really, really enjoyed it- especially since I studied Roman and Greek history :) I absolutely loved all the characters and I'm a sucker for a happy ending hehe. There are a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but what story doesn't have that? Thanks for writing such an awesome piece ;)
| Zlen chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
Best story ever! I laughed, cried, got sad, smiled and couldn't stop reading for the life of me. I din't wanna let go of the two just yet and I want more! Man I would have loved to 'see' Crispin struggle to adjust to the new way of life, him in a tux on his wedding day, in a mall, movies, amusement park, in a car, talking on the phone... That would have been hilarious to say the least.
I wish you could write a short sequel on their life.
Very good work with this story though. I was on the edge, barely breathing in the last few chapters, fingers crossed so tightly i might have dislocated them :)
| MTveit chapter 24 . 8/27/2015
I have read this story at least four times now, and I just can't seem to stop! Every few monts I always come back to it. Truly one of the best works I've read on fictionpress. So I just wanted to say thank you again, for not removing it, and for writing it in the first place! I don't even know if you use fictionpress anymore, but if you do, I wish you all the best! Maybe one day you'll even publish. I'll be sure to buy this story if it ever comes out, just so I know I own a copy.
Thank you again!