Reviews for Not This Time
atomic-pocket-watch chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
i don't know what to say exactly, but i really like it. again, you've rhymed very nicely and you haven't forced it, it's fluid and beautiful and angry. but a sort of muted anger. i can imagine someone saying it, you know in a tone where they're pissed off but they're trying to be civil and polite. i really do like it. and i hate it when people try to control someone so i like that this person is speaking out against twats like that. :D j'adore ca.

au revoir maintenant. :D