Reviews for Soul Black, Blood Red
017Bluefield chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Why? I like emo.
ChaosInSync chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
That was quite good actualy :)

And for a first poem, it was impressive.

Criticism: since it is about war, maybe you could've added more elements of it- like those that you have seen die, or how the sights,noises,sounds have effected you? Just saying :)