Reviews for Rhymes and Rainbows
4 the dragonhearted girl chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
This is so good I have just read a couple of your poems and I love the descriptions you use, you see things with a different perspective and I love it
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I wish this had more structure to it. There were clear places where the topic changed and there could have been a stanza break, so it felt strange not to have one. Punctuation might have helped sort your ideas, too.

I do love the images of this. On top of the central one, "rhymes and rainbows," you have a lot of smaller ones, such as the flying, the fairies, the sparkling clothes, etc. It's all these little things that make piece so strong.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
Evilives chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
My god, I am speechless.

..."Flower fairies..." :D

Yeah, I'm having a spazz attack right now.
SargentLooneyPencil chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
this was utterly beautiful... excellent job... i LOVE it..