|Reviews for Christian|
| natmarie chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Interesting, potential. His name is Chris, which makes me think maybe the title has two meanings in the plot. But I'm known to overanalyze. :)
| LornaNess chapter 2 . 3/11/2011
A church girl story. I like. I like.
I think you should add more detail to water ballon fight though. It could be a really fun piece.
Chris's reluctance to come is interesting. A lot of people are like that regarding churchy activites, and you captured that.
| conleyswifey chapter 2 . 3/11/2011
please keep up with this story.. I really think it has a lot of potential and we need more christian based romances on fp. I like the way that you write and it flows really well and keeps the reader interested. Good job