|Reviews for That Summer Promise|
| Locket-2-my-Heart chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Hey, I love how you fit the poem into the story. The poem is really amazing!
Please write some more!
| uniquely-unique chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Oh my goodness. I literally have tears in my eyes!
This is so sad. I haven't read anything that sad in a while.
You are such a good writer!
Please write more amazing stories! (
| mickey burriss chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
I enjoyed the story but felt like quitting when you mentioned “I am writing” this interrupted the story and made the story jump around which became confusing to me. I liked the boy girl friendship and want to set how they end up. Please keep working on it.
I suggest deleting the first 2 paragraphs and all references I am writing. Stick with the story to hold the reader.
Good luck and thank you for letting me read this captivating romance. Mickey Burriss