Reviews for Beautifully Flawed
Luv2Live chapter 32 . 8/6/2013
I hate them fighting. I have a feeling its going to get worse before it gets better
lanae96 chapter 32 . 8/6/2013
This chapter is so sad :( Benry better hope that Collins takes him back ! I love them together 3
Ginbrat chapter 32 . 8/6/2013
Oh God Benry...Why? That's all I have to ask you. Why?
Please update soon.
dawnbnozy chapter 31 . 8/4/2013
i really do enjoy your writing and your amazing at it too! Your stories are very thrilling and making me want to read more. i really enjoyed your other story "Don't fall for players" and the sequel after that. I honestly was disappointed how you ended the story about a grown up Raine. I was also disappointed how you ended the story, not explaining much about where James and Raine will be a couple in the future. The same with Colton and Tenley, i didn't like how they separated and now we never know if they got back together.
I did enjoy this story... but I'm sorry to say that was the worst ending ever. If u even make a sequel or added another chapter to try and make Benry and Collins work out because i loved them it would have been perfect. So another disappointment for the ending.
readerladida chapter 31 . 7/30/2013
I've been reading this story pretty much non stop. I honestly love it and I think you're an amazing writer. I hope things work out for the two of them soon. I don't know how strong their relationship truly is if they are so insecure about eachother and themselves. Love your to love another and I guess neither love themselves truly.
NeverNeverLandGirl chapter 31 . 7/29/2013
You are killing me not knowing wht happened to Greg, but I know that just makes you a good author. I read this whole thing in two nights and can I just say I love it?! The story is so well put together and there is just enough drama in the story to make it interesting. You are a amazing writer and I am so glad I found you on here. My heart was almost breaking in that last chapter with the phone call. Please update soon. I want to see what happens! Great story again! Keep it up!
Jules chapter 31 . 7/25/2013
GREAT and FANTASTIC writing, but there is one problem. Not a big deal, but tons of grammatical/spelling errors. It's probably just my OCD but that's the only flaw in this piece!
AccountkillerO1 chapter 31 . 7/22/2013
Oh no... I really hope they make up! Please, hurry with the update.. i'm dying here!
mylittleprincess chapter 31 . 7/21/2013
omg! update fast.
foreternity chapter 31 . 7/21/2013
WHAT NO FK NO SHE HAS TO FORGIVE HIMMM :( its benry and colllins foreveeerrrr LOLOLOL :P pleaseeee let them talk it out and reconcile! :) updatee please!
Menn chapter 31 . 7/21/2013
The EMOTION of your stories are nice! I really feel the blushing, frustration, and love here! Keep it up.
Guest chapter 31 . 7/21/2013
Whyyyyy ?! :'( :'( my babies :'(
lanae96 chapter 31 . 7/21/2013
Love love love this part ! I was close to tears lol . I can't wait until they actually talk :)
AdooreKhwab chapter 31 . 7/21/2013
Yeah.. I agree that it is short. I wish it were longer. This chapter was good. Better than I expected. You wrote her turmoil well.
skye real chapter 31 . 7/21/2013
Gawd, the emotions in this chapter is amazing. My heart was absolutely breaking just reading it. A lot of people can empathise with the both of them so that makes it so real. Oohh I so cant wait for your next update :-)
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