|Reviews for rubber gloves and lack of love|
| punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
i love this. this is incredible. "smiling with his sixteen buck dentures." the resentment in that line is almost tangible. and the second stanza is absolutely beautiful.
| a nameless emotion chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
I Really Like It.. Nice Work x
| LadyBlahBlah chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
That was...unusual. Very enjoyable. the flow is odd and I love it. I especially like the "hooker" line. :D
(That whole synapse thing does remind of that movie)
| theCoffeeEnzyme chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
This was very interesting. The break up of "oblivion" was definitely eye catching.
The poem made me think of Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind with the people coming in and erasing memories. Definitely a unique topic to write about it.
Your imagery is very good; I'll probably have some nightmare about those dentures tonight. I liked the transition between emotions as well with the popping synapses (which I equated to a racing mind), then that calm feeling (the butterfly fingers), and finally that bit of apparent regret right at the end. It pulls the reader in effectively. Nice job.