| Reviews for The Underground |
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   felixlee14 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011 Whoa:D |
| Ebrethiel chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 That ending ... was amazing. It was really intelligent and suspensful. I really enjoyed how it concluded. Well done. The whole thing reads more like a diary entry than a short story. I thought it could use a bit more description. That aside, I thoroughly enjoyed the story. xD xD xD |