Reviews for The Underground
felixlee14 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Ebrethiel chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
That ending ... was amazing. It was really intelligent and suspensful. I really enjoyed how it concluded. Well done.

The whole thing reads more like a diary entry than a short story. I thought it could use a bit more description.

That aside, I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

xD xD xD