Reviews for Break up words
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
imagery and language is biting, but there is so much truth in your words.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Review Marathon this weekend (link in my profile!)

I like how you mention the poetry in both the beginning and the ending because it really ties the piece together.

I also like the part about the tongue living in their mouth. It was a really great image.

The only part I didn't get was the game thing. I didn't get what game you were referring to or how it fit in.