|Reviews for Mist Man|
| Variation-in-Progress chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
I, at first, was discouraged at the viewpoint. The story is quite strong already, but I felt that the story can be stronger if it was an “I” point of view. Still, well done for describing the story. I saw it vividly, and if that was the aim of the viewpoint then it served its purpose.
For the story itself, I liked the separate ambiguity of this fantasy world. I liked how you focused into the emotions after the strange event into the fantasy world. You didn't explain into great detail the fantasy, but it does serve to bring a strange sort of emotion into the story. It kept me interested in what would happen next, though this screen shot of the plot is enough to be beautiful and wonderful.