Reviews for Digging
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
I liked the formatting here. The punctuation and parenthesis worked really well. I also liked the ee cummings reference it was great. Changing the tenses of dig in that one part was an interesting thing as was burrowing backwards. Nice alliteration with that part too.

I also like the ending. The combination of doom and gloom and uplifting was really great.

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too.much.of.water chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
I think I'm in love with your writing style. It's visually beautiful and I love that poem too :) Mudluscious should really be added to the dictionary.