Reviews for On the Precipice of Forever
Rylee chapter 11 . 9/23/2012
Yay! I made it in just in time to not die!

I'm really glad that we got to be such good friends. :) And i love your story.

Just wanted to let you know.


And Happy late Birthday review present!
xStarryxKnightx chapter 11 . 9/13/2012
I love you too.
Thanks for everything, babes.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 11 . 9/12/2012
Wow... you really are dedicated to this story, aren't you?
How do you pronounce your friend Saoirse's name? Just wondering... I've never seen it before.
Update soon! Xd
Tarah xXx
klaralouw chapter 10 . 9/2/2012
Your story is amazing! I've honestly never been so excited for someone to update, I must admit. Soo...update soon please! :D
I get a bit confused with all of the characters, but I'm starting to get a hang of it now,, thankfully!
Xxx klara
klaralouw chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
...Wow...just wow.. This chapter is like really descriptive and realistic. It gave me the chills soooo bad! Which is a good thing, I think :)
Rylee H chapter 10 . 8/23/2012
Hey! So I was recommended this story a very long time ago by Athelind. But I am not sure if i told you i read it... I just came back to it for the first time in a while and I learned that I am a character! Yay! Your story is so creative, and overall it's awesome. This particular chapter, with the beginning part from the warriors' perspectives, was particularly powerful. I had fun figuring out who all of the characters were, although my only criticism would be that there are a TON of characters to keep straight (and that's sort of a bad pun with this past chapter, isn't it?).

I think I will marry someone with a nice, normal last name...

-Rylee Hornslug
NadiaIsHome chapter 10 . 8/13/2012
Im finally back from monastery camp! Athy texted me about halfway through it yelling, "LEALAH LIKES TRAINS!" And I was like I HAVE ABSOLUTELY NO INTERNET! Oh the things I deal with to go to SMC... But anywho, I nearly cried when I read about the boys being unable to walk. NUUU! I know how that feels all too well... But they are not allowed wheelchairs! I hate those darn things. Gr. They shall not become cripples. So there. On the rest of the story, I got a tiny bit confused as to all the new characters. But that might be because I read most of this really late at night. Erk. Haha I loved the plot line in this one though! This is why I shall never be famous. Id hate to have to deal with this. You shouldve seen my face when I read about Sandy having twins! I was sitting next to Athy on the bus and my eyes bugged out and my mouth dropped through the floor. Apparently it was really funny. Ahhk! I cant wait to read where this is going! No baseball bats though! And please let the boys live. UPDATE SOON! Thanks for keeping on writing!
xStarryxKnightx chapter 10 . 8/6/2012
I'm in a lusty mood OKAY. I TYPED LISTY. I SWEAR. Yay, autocorrect! I'm in a listy mood, so here we go.

1: I like new peoples.
2: I love the third person pov from Si! Glad to have a little glimpse at what the Searchers do now.
3: Ronnie plays the flute as well. And the piano. Just thought I'd drop that in . DROP IT LIKE IT'S HOT. Yum.
4: That article. Omg. I was so entertained!
5: Funny story. I actually just finished a dinner of pancakes before reading this chappie. Mum gave me three. I barely got through two. Hehh. Maybe it was because I ate too much corn. Yup. Told you it was a funny story.
6: IF I CAN'T TAKE MY COFFEE BREAK, SOMETHING WITHIN ME DIES. *clutches chest and laughs as 'Draco' pretends to hang himself and then reincarnates as a zombie* Please tell me you saw what I just referenced. Kristy's homepage. Go. 3
7: GAHH. BOHEMIAN RHAPSODY. I. LOVE. THAT. SONG. WHY CAN'T WE BRING IT BACK FOR PEP BAND WAHHHH \3 Musicae told me some great stories about that.
7.5: Btdubbs, GUESS WHO HAS INFO ON BAND CAMP AND THE NEW PEP BAND MUSIC *dances around* Shhhh! No telling that I know! Cleo will kill me and the person who told me! Hehh... We're doing ALL One Direction. Or so the rumors are supposed to go ;D I CAN'T TELL YOU WHAT IT REALLY IS THOUGH maybe partially because I only remember two of the songs that were mentioned to me... Because I was distracted by the beautiful music pouring from my radio... BUT I get my new bracelet at band camp! He promised! But thats a whole other topic. Let's not, shall we? XD
Umm... 8?: Someone Like You still makes me cry. Ballad of my life.
9: I can't wait for part two of this chapter! Thank you so much, Laelah;D -3
10: I wanted this list to be an even number.
11: I love you.
12: Crap. Loving you ruined the evenness. But now it's at twelve. Not shady. Nope.


Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 10 . 8/6/2012
I can kinda understand what's going on, but there are too many characters... I think I've already said that but whatever. It's hard to develop characters when there are so many to remember. How can you do it?
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 9 . 5/26/2012
great chapter!

There are a lot of characters, but I can generally follow what's going on. I like how there isn't something dramatic (yet) that requires you to know who's who and stuff. I'm really not good at that...

Update soon

Tarah xXx
xStarryxKnightx chapter 9 . 5/24/2012
*drops review*

Hay gurl hay it's your pal Lindy!

Okay, can I say...

I was laughing so hard throughout this entire chapter. You know me too well. My character is cracking mysel up xD

I absobloodylutely LOVE the rumors! Omg! BAHAHAHA I'm curious as to what my unspeakable tattoo is xD Good thing I found some sharpies in this new world to keep me occupied without a piano.

YAY MUSICAE! Haha... Scenery... I would...

I loved the end. Loved the Great Gatsby reference.

Speaking of references, the money system really reminded me of Harry Potter.

Hehh Sandy's having twins!

The twins crack me up. That's so legit. I love it. And I can totally see Cyd fooling around like that and starting a variety of rumors. Rumour has is OOOO rumour has it OOOO

I so happy we all reunited! Me, Lae, Sandy, Cyd's twin (still cannot spell her name).


Lindy misses the stars :(

I enjoyed this chapter. Too much. Thanks for updating finally! And thanks to Will for pushing you. And I love Will's review for the record.

Love and bunnies,

Saiorse H chapter 9 . 5/24/2012
Hola! Just sayin, I love how you can capture everyone's personalities :) aaannnnddddddd yes, I am going to kill Cyd. He totally WOULD start the rumors. And Dinto. He'd start the ones about me. But anyway, I should probably get more stuff up for you on dA xD ima procrastinator i know. Love ya Lexie!
William Kreach chapter 9 . 5/24/2012
I thought that I should leave a short review, even though I have no literary credibility. I don't even read. Anyway, I really am enjoying your story, Lae. Each rumor in that guide was spot on with what Cyd would have said, and it made me laugh like crazy. I am glad you added me in, even if I was just goofing around. It is awesome that you are being reunited with so many of your friends as well.

I don't have much else to say, but I am looking forward to the next chapter. My apologies for the lack of eloquence and lingual skills in the review placed before you.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 8 . 4/14/2012
certainly an interesting story...

Shouldn't it be under something like supernatural or si-fi something though?

Regardlesss, it still is a fun story to read!

Tarah xXx
Nadiathe demented squirrel chapter 8 . 2/19/2012
Omg this chapters beautiful! I love how you ended it with the lost dreams world...With the glowing/radioactive mushrooms (hehe.. those would be some weird shrooms..) We should go stargazing sometime... But thats off topic.. Aahhhhkkkkk! Fingernails! Eeeeewww! I hate fingernails. I would have mine retracted 24/7. Its a really cool idea though. Hehe moles... Thats an interesting form of transportation... Aannnyywhjoo I should go sleepy time noaw before my momm tries to ground me again. XP Good job with the chapter! Cant wait for more trains!
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