Reviews for Love Lies
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
The puzzle piece thing is a bit cliche, but I liked how you did it. Saying no one has all the pieces is an interesting take on it which I haven't read before.

I also loved the line "We're mutes to one another" That was a great description and really described how people cana e with each other.

I liked the ending too. "warped reality" was an interesting phrase choice and it worked.

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Archia chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
People alawys want to blame others for everything. I like the message in what you wrote, and the simpleness yet deepness of this.