Reviews for thaw me
Bonjour Skitty chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
First off, your style is unique. The lack of punctuation reminds me of free-flowing thought. Secondly, I quite enjoy the winter/spring duality going on here. I can relate. I'm in a similar situation, but as with the seasons, we too work in cycles.
classic violet chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
I like the theme of this, whether or not to let emotions in or not and comparing that with winter and spring. lovely poem.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
I love how the frozen and cold is seen as a good thing here with Spring being scary. It's a nice change from they typical yay Spring piece. Plus I'm a winter person... lol.

I like the idea of being filled with emptiness. It's an interesting paradox.

I like the question at the end too. It was a great description and I like how it was a question. The reader can sort of answer which is nice.

The piece is good. The whole idea is well done and I liked the descriptions in it.

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