I DO love this! This is a-MA-zing! I love them so much :d Great work!

i adore this. "splattered with cold" amazing.

and i love how you separated "her thought wander far away from reality" and made it its own stanza, it really added to the effect of it. & the ending taking away all the extra stuff about what isn't important and then ending up with it just being she loves a boy. this poem was brilliant. i thoroughly enjoyed reading it. favorite :)