Reviews for Effortless
helplessromantic285 chapter 24 . 5/19/2011
I have kleenex in my hand , I don't want this story to end. But, I'm glad they are fine, and they are starting to trust each other after so long. I'm glad there isn't much chaos in these last chapters. Hopefully there is a third book about these two. Maybe about their marriage, and having kids. We would like to see his and Keira's reaction to forming a again, with such a creative brain of yours, I'm pretty sure, we will hear of it soon.

I totally loved this chapter!
Devilish Kisses chapter 24 . 5/19/2011
Okay, this chapter made me smile :) I'm REALLY glad they talked everything out! Talking about it was crucial! So, I'm glad they're back together again!

When Kellan woke her up with a cup of coffee, my heart warmed as I realized that he does love her and will go to the ends of the earth to be with her :) They're just too perfect to not be together

Lol, Anna! I'm also glad she's beginning to accept her pregnancy! I hope it's a girl too ha ha! The literary, rock-band world doesn't need another Griffin!

Thanks for the update! made my morning!
Bkimmer chapter 24 . 5/19/2011
I think I had a big cheesy smile on my face when I finished this chapter. ) Hopefully they keep with the honesty and no more secrets from now on. Still anticipating Griffin's reaction to the baby. I think Kellan is correct - a baby to dote on may just be what Griffin needs.

I do hope Kellan talks to his father one day. I think it will be good for him. I am also hesitant on the point that now that he and the d-bags are becoming successful and famous - would his Dad just be trying to use him?

I think you could definitely do a book 3 ) You could maybe use Anna for that since her issues seem to be developing more with the baby, Griffin, and what she is going to do. Obviously, it still has to have Kellan and Kiera in it.

I know this book is coming to an end soon. I can't wait to see what you do next.
LuvDogs5 chapter 24 . 5/19/2011
I am so happy that Kellan and Kiera talked and everything is good.

I cried at the messages from his Dad. That is so sad, he really wants to see him and talk to him.

Anna is so funny.
Kelly Rogala chapter 24 . 5/19/2011
I want to cry because this is almost over! I think you should right a sequel to the sequel hahaha...

I laughed a little reading this part..."Oh…oh!" She gave me a hug. "Oh, I'm so relieved. I was going to kill you if you'd gotten yourself stuck in another love triangle." Rolling her eyes, she shook her head. "Especially if it was the same love triangle." Smirking, she added, "If you're gonna be an idiot…at least branch out."

Thats Anna for ya lol

Update soon :)
craziebabe45 chapter 23 . 5/19/2011
My computer died and I had to get it fixed or else I would have commented earlier. I probably won't have it back for another week. rawr.

But thank you for saving me from dying by posting this chapter. I knew Kellan wasn't cheating! HA! I held out hope the whole time and was successful. I knew you were too much of a romantic for that! Can't wait for the final three installments. I detailed a full outline of the rest of my book so that I can be sure to get things out as fast as I can even if I have to go into school to type everything up.
bluz chapter 23 . 5/19/2011
Ohmygoodness, I was holding my breath and clutching my pillow as I was reading the secret that Kellan was hiding. I kept on going back and forth on whether he cheated and was happy to hear the end results. Honestly, these last three chapters (which were pretty quick updates, thank you!) were intense.

Kellan is one of those people/character that I feel need a hug because he was given enough positive attention. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
bluz chapter 22 . 5/19/2011
oh, no no no no no no no no no no nooooooooooo! They can't break up! I can certainly understand where he concluded that they slept together (1. she did not tell him that Denny was back 2. They were huddle when Kellan walked in the room). However, I refuse to believe that this is their demise.
bluz chapter 21 . 5/18/2011
I am happy to hear that Anna decided not to abort the baby. Whether she keeps the baby, hmmm, can't wait to see the decision and how everything unfolds.

On another subject, I do not think Kellan is cheating . . . at least I hope he is not cheating. That would truly be bad. I am not sure why I have so much faith in him than Kiera, but I do.
ka3na chapter 23 . 5/18/2011
Alright! My first real review EVER on F/P. This book is the ONLY reason why I signed up ) ha ha ha.

I really LOVED this chapter. It's great on so many levels! I swear I was going to have a panic attack after I read chapter 22 to find out there was no chapter 23! I had to call my best friend halfway around the world to fill her in! Ha ha. But really, this was a great chapter. Finally, Keira is growing some balls! I love how she's building up her courage and self esteem. When she tells Kellan to keep his 'fucking secrets' and calls him an asshole while telling him she wasn't pregnant, I got goosebumps and had the goofiest grin on my face!

I'm happy the truth is finally out between the two of them. They are both stubborn as all hell, and both a little insecure when it comes to their relationship, but I don't blame them. They're taking a huge leap of faith given the situation of their past. I can't to read what happens next!

As in all your books, there is so much passion, emotion, and feeling in your words. It's an addicting emotional roller coaster ride that I can NOT get enough of. I ALWAYS recommend your books to my friends that will appreciate a good read, and yours are truly exceptional. To date, I have three friends who have changed their top lists of authors of all time with you being in the top three! AND THEY'RE BOOKWORMS! Ha ha ha.

Since this is my first review, I do have to admit one thing: I have read all your books at least 4 times except for Collision Course. I was barely able to handle it the first time. I'm a grown woman that can enjoy a good emotional read, but that book...I couldn't stop the waterworks. I think I sobbed maybe twice in this one part, and my husband had to come up and check on me if everything was OK. Yeah, that intense. Like I said before, the emotion in your books is so tangible, its hard for people to NOT get addicted. Congratulations on all your accomplishments so far, and I wish you the best on everything. I promise my next reviews will be shorter )

Alright! Lets get that next chapter up!
charliej chapter 23 . 5/18/2011
This is my lucky day - three times in a row I've been able to access a chapter and review. The gremlins must finally have worked their way out of the system.

Now, if she's lying in her room on her bed why didn't she see the prenancy tests? I can't picture Kellen stopping to put them away neatly...maybe she's just too overcome with grief?

Glad Denny called and came over and I'm glad she didn't just stay there wallowing in her misery. Going after him even if it was just for an explanation was a good move.

Good writing - the way you had the accusations flying back and forth and the drama of the phone ringing and him grabbing it...

And she walked out on him! Go girl! Not that I completely blame Kellen for jumping to conclusions or anything but I'm glad she's showing her spine here. Just tossing that revelation over her shoulder and walking out made a great scene. Not sure how Anna's going to feel about her secret having been shared but that's a future concern.

So now Kellen's feeling his neck for being an a** and they sort of reconcile but darn...that secret was still between them and...I WAS RIGHT AGAIN! It was long lost family members! Glad it wasn't an unknown child of Kellen's because that would have really made things awkward for them. So he has a sister and he seems to like her which is good. And there's a brother? Wow, family just popping up everywhere. (I wonder if the brother looks like him or not? Maybe that one could turn out to be the right guy for...oh darn...brain fart here...the other girl at Pete's...what's her name! know who I mean. The brother could come to watch Kellen's band perform at Pete's and meet her! Another story just waiting for you to write!)

So, back to the 'to meet the real Dad or not" question. I'm with Kiera. Kellen's brain will continue to be messed up until he does and the longer he holds off, the bigger the issue will loom before him. But how to do it without p***ing him off? Hmmm... And why does the father want contact suddenly after all these years. Did the father even know about Kellen? Is the man sick and dying? Does he need Kellen for some kind of bone marrow transplant or...?

Eager to read how this plays out!
charliej chapter 22 . 5/18/2011
Wow - I can finally access this chapter. Will miracles ever cease?

LOL on the prego book in the freezer - Anna really is rather quirky.

Hmmm... could sense bad things building up this whole chapter. Denny being all sad, Jenny questioning what Kiera's doing, the two of them being friends and hugging... Sort of a storm that just kept brewing and brewing and you knew it wasn't going to end well.

Nice that Kellen wanted to surprise her with flowers and all - poor posies just left forgotten on the floor - I hope Anna finds them and puts them in water!

All that anger and suspicion - everyone must have been saying 'I told you so' to Kiera as they read this. However while it was very tense it was still sexy. You did a nice job with their explosive reunion.

LOL I wanted to say, no Kiera, don't leave him alone, don't go in the bathroom! I just knew it was going to be a bad move. He's found the pregnancy tests, hasn't he? Silly girl to not have retrieved them and hidden them in Anna's closet or thrown them out or something.

Glad Kellen didn't actually hurt her. You could tell he was really mad but under it all he still loves her, I just know it. Now she just has to figure a way out to get through to him or he has to run into Anna who will tell him or...well...I guess I'll go read the next chapter and see which it is!
charliej chapter 21 . 5/18/2011
Hmmm...I KNOW I reviewed this chapter but it's disappeared and strangely enough they're letting me post another review...twilight zone? hallucinations? Oh well, will try again...

I must admit the idea of prego Hooters girl does boggle the mind but I'm sure Anna could carry it off. Sort of like the Demi Moore cover shots from several years back.

Yay, that Jenny's pic seems to have turned the tide now if only Anna will keep the baby AND tell Griffin. Yeah, the man comes across as a jerk but perhaps he's the kind of guy who will do a complete turn around at the news of impending fatherhood. I hope so. I like tidy endings.

Glad Kiera is there for her but missing that time with Kellen isn't so good. They're in for trouble, I just know it. Reports of Kellen talking to someone extensively aren't a good thing, though I'm quite sure he's not cheating. If he was - and he isn't - it would be with someone who's hanging around, not someone he needs to constantly be calling and texting.

LOL on the kiss. Poor Cheyenne. Glad Kiera wasn't nasty to her about that. BTW, love that name. Nice choice - I was just reading a book and the male lead's name was Navarro. Must be my week for Native American sounding names.

Okay, crossing fingers that this one appears but I'm still vexed over missing being number 500! Darn you Fiction press!
zenith0321 chapter 23 . 5/18/2011
THANK YOU! Finally released the breath I was holding ) I know you're generally a happily ever after kind of girl but you seriously have a talent for the build up and I thought I was going to pass out from the anxiety. Love these two and need them to have their HEA! But I feel the end is near now and that just sucks (
kelly c chapter 23 . 5/18/2011
I am soooooo glad they sorted it out, but what is anna going to say i dont think kellan will keep the pregnancy from griffin.
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