Reviews for Effortless
Britt Woods chapter 12 . 5/29/2011
First off, I totally screamed like a freak when I realized there was a sequel to this. It was super fun explaining that to my Dad haha Secondly, this is so great! I love seeing Kellen and Kiera's relationship develop. I get all invested in so many fictional characters only to be left to my own devices after "the big confession" scene. Also, the scene at the end of this chapter when Kellen said, "I'll have the Denver Omelet... thank you." I just about lost my mind. Hilarious.

Thank you for continuing with this amazing world you created! I'm not alone, I'm sure, when I say it makes you pretty freaking awesome.
Tracy chapter 26 . 5/26/2011
I loved your stories, all of them, they are so beautiful. I loved all your main characters.
Meme chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
I finished this story a few days ago and I've been thinking. If you did continue Tue story, which I hope you do, I wonder if you would consider doing a few chapters from Kellan's point of view. It would be Kiera moat of the time, but I think it would be really interesting to see it from his point of view. Just a couple chapters.

Just something to think about

StaNdUPtomE chapter 26 . 5/24/2011
Loved it, and I do hope you do more, it was a great story! Plus Griffen is gunna be a Dad... scary...
bluz chapter 26 . 5/23/2011
I had high hopes that Griffin would be supportive of having a child, and was really glad to hear that he accepted the idea of being a father. Overall, It was a pleasure reading this story and reading the couples up's and down's.
andyouthinkyouknowme chapter 26 . 5/23/2011
Aw. it's over. so sad. What am i going to look forward to in my email now? I do hope we see more from K&K and from you. I always enjoy your stories so much. Til next time!
Tcjames131 chapter 26 . 5/23/2011
Sigh... My house is officially falling apart around me because I had to read this story in it's entirety with as few interruptions as possible. I am in love with Kellen and Kiera. Thoughtless had become my favorite book/story and I was ecstatic when I found out about Effortless. I've been waiting for you to publish on feedbooks.

I love all of your work. Your writing, characters, story development,and some of the yummy steamy scenes. Thank you for continuing their story and I can only hope for more. I'm a little sad that I have finished reading it.

Of course I'm an aspiring writer and you've inspired me even more. Keeping my eyes peeled for future attractions!

:) T.C. James
craziebabe45 chapter 26 . 5/22/2011
WOWOWOWOW! It's over. I can't believe it. I can't believe this happened. It was so wonderful. You're pretty much incredible. I loved Griffin's reaction to Anna. I love that they got married at the end. I hope you continue it.
YOUNG-the wild. free. in love chapter 26 . 5/22/2011
I'm lie!

I love you so much...its painful. Hahaha. But serisouly, I love your writing and your stories.

Just wanted to say that I love Effortless as much as I love Thoughtless.

To be honest, the only stories I've read from you are "Thoughtless" "Effortless" and "It's All relative". I've never read your trilogy of 'Conversion' becuase I'm not a fan of vampire stories...not even a little.

So now that Effortless is done...I feel so lonely. I'm definitely going to miss Kellan...and the rest of the characters of course :)

You definitely have enough to have a 3rd book. I would love to hear about Anna, Griffin, and the baby. Kellan, and his REAL family. Keira and Kellan's wedding. And what will happen to Keira and Kellan's relationship in L.A. and on tour.

Fingers crossed for a 3rd book!

So now that I have nothing to read. I will re read Thoughtless...this is now for the...6th time...I think. I've read it SOO many times I lost count. Hahaha.

I know...I'm obsessed :)

Well, bye...for now.
riellybabie101 chapter 26 . 5/22/2011
Seriously I wanted to cry. Loved this whole story!
Shenelleb22 chapter 26 . 5/22/2011
Yes, Please continue the chapters of Kellan Kyle's life.

I have fallen in love with his character and was ecstatic when i saw the story title 'Effortless' and just knew that it was about him and Kiera. Please continue his legacy, i would love to see what became of Griffin and Anna.
LeAnn chapter 26 . 5/22/2011
I agree. I think you must keep writing about Kellan Kyle. I demand it ;) god I am so sad that it's over but I'm really glad everything worked out in the end. And their "wedding" was so cute. It fit them perfectly. I'm really going to miss them :(
LoVeHoPe09 chapter 26 . 5/22/2011
YAYYAYYAY! I loved it! And I am so happy that there may be a sequel in store! thank you so much for all of your hard work! you are excellent! xoxo
LuvDogs5 chapter 26 . 5/22/2011
I really love this ending. It gives us hope for a 3rd book.

I love how Griffin reacted to Anna's pregnancy. It was so cute. I like how he turned to Kellan for advice. This is a new turning point for Griffin. I just know it.

Kellan getting to know if family is the best. It is going to be good for him to get to know them.

Kellan proposing the Kiera was just the best. We can get a wedding on the next book.

Can't wait to see whats in store next.
hayleytibbs chapter 26 . 5/22/2011
Oooh I am so so sad its all over :( but that was the most amazing chapter the ending was just perfect, your right you do do warm and fuzzy as well as mean hehe :D

Firstly wooooo! Kiera graduated :D hasn't she grown in the last few years, It made me smile that they were all there for her, and yaaaay for moving in with Kellan!

I loved that Kellan finally met his family, I think it will do wonders for him having them in his life after lots and lots of talking!

I also loved Griffins reaction to the baby, who knew eh? hehe made me chuckle how he always turns to Kellan when he is in need of advice. I think this will be the making of him and Anna, he can tone down his language that is lol

Awwwweee he asked her to be his exciting! You once again had me in tears, your are very good at that :D I do prefer these happy tears though!

I am very very happy to see that you haven't sealed the story yet, I would love to see more from them as you know I love this story and 'Thoughtless' is one of my all time favorites...can we see baby Kellan's please hehe :D

So all that is left to say is..congratulations, I know you were worried about writing a follow on and not being able to do it justice after how much everyone fell for 'Thoughtless' but I think you pulled it off wonderfully I loved every single part of it, yes even the parts that had me reaching for the ice cream ;) lol :D LOVE IT!

Sooo whats next? I can't wait to read more from you, I have loved everything you have written, your truly are a great author :D

x Hayley x
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