Reviews for Deepest Desires
taylorduncan chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
This poem is so amazing! I totally relate to everything you said and I love it. It is beautifully written, also. :) You are my favorite poet on FictionPress.
Melusine Stafford chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
How...frank. Sounds like many teenagers these days, just wanting to try things and seeing possibilities and just wishing. It makes me feel all warm inside.

It makes me sad, too, your thoughts or not. To give to dangerous impulses and wish for things you might already have.

P.S.-Don't yell at me for being spiritual, but the body is not nearly as important as the mind it houses. And yours seems to be a good one. :)
Reklaw Sicnarf Ir chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Cigarettes really aren't all that and your beauty is defined by the people you surround yourself with.

But this is very nice, even though it's simple. There's no nonsense, and I appreciate that.