Reviews for Sex, Not Making Love
Hi chapter 20 . 7/31/2020
Hi
Carson chapter 21 . 4/14/2020
I'm 17 and I would never come to as good of wrighting as u did here great job
cookielover chapter 21 . 3/27/2020
Why the hell are you so amzaing!?i have read alot of love fanfictions but yours!yours is the best!i know im a few years late please keep writing you are my fav writer i never find good fanfictions yours has a whole story and it doesnt just jump into sex you are amzaing if you do write a book in real life i would buy it keep up the amzing work
Cleo chapter 1 . 1/8/2020
Is that Niki and Nate as the picture?
Guest chapter 21 . 10/17/2019
Hi! I loved the story. I get that anxiety you talked about when posting the story, and it's fine to have people mad at you butyou shouldn't feel too bad about it. There will be people like that and you can't feel bad about it. Read it, know about it, and move on. Of course you have to improve on yourself but you shouldn't be so hard on yourself.

I read this story and pushed on even though there were the I'm-not-like-other-girls elements and slutshaming going on but it was part of her character, and I can't say that calling girls slut when you hate them isn't normal for girls like us. It's a hateable characteristic but it's standard. Just as long as the slutshaming is called out in the story, I think it's okay.

Over all, the story was pretty consistent, I can see your effort in keeping it up, and I definitely would still like to read more of your work and see your improvement as a writer.
Myght Dyno chapter 22 . 6/2/2019
I hoped there would be an epilogue where Maggie and Carson would have like six kids and married.
Z chapter 1 . 5/30/2019
Dk
somersaultkick chapter 22 . 5/23/2019
I thought this was an epilogue!
Ala chapter 13 . 3/25/2019
Just wanna say this is one of the best fanfics i've ever read.
SpaceBot chapter 21 . 10/6/2018
Oh my god! This book/story is sooooo good! You shouldn’t doubt yourself, this is one of the best stories I’ve ever read! I’m so glad I found this story! I would totally read more of this! Keep up with the good work! And good luck with school and everything!
Guest chapter 21 . 7/5/2018
this was such a great story i loved it! u should really continue it
Fiction reviewer chapter 21 . 6/9/2018
THIS WAS AWESOME
I especially liked that once they started dating they never cheated because that is a really bad habit authors have which makes me want to barf although I did not really appreciate that Carson did cheat once but otherwise I loved how sweet this was!
Guest chapter 21 . 5/5/2018
Great Read! Enjoyed it a lot!
RDHLoveBug chapter 21 . 3/30/2018
I seriously had to bite my lip to not grin and blush harder... Seriously never been this glad of my tan completion before!(well other then the time when my boyfriend harassed me with jokes while I was out with my mum. And my mum is not as chill as Maggie's mother. Anyways!) I love this story soooooo freaking muchhhhhh!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/11/2018
Okay, can I just say that you are amazing at writing sex scenes? You should try to get published.
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