Reviews for Sex, Not Making Love |
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![]() ![]() Oh my... wow. That was dramatic. And AMAZING |
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![]() ![]() I'm 17 and I would never come to as good of wrighting as u did here great job |
![]() ![]() Why the hell are you so amzaing!?i have read alot of love fanfictions but yours!yours is the best!i know im a few years late please keep writing you are my fav writer i never find good fanfictions yours has a whole story and it doesnt just jump into sex you are amzaing if you do write a book in real life i would buy it keep up the amzing work |
![]() ![]() Is that Niki and Nate as the picture? |
![]() ![]() Hi! I loved the story. I get that anxiety you talked about when posting the story, and it's fine to have people mad at you butyou shouldn't feel too bad about it. There will be people like that and you can't feel bad about it. Read it, know about it, and move on. Of course you have to improve on yourself but you shouldn't be so hard on yourself. I read this story and pushed on even though there were the I'm-not-like-other-girls elements and slutshaming going on but it was part of her character, and I can't say that calling girls slut when you hate them isn't normal for girls like us. It's a hateable characteristic but it's standard. Just as long as the slutshaming is called out in the story, I think it's okay. Over all, the story was pretty consistent, I can see your effort in keeping it up, and I definitely would still like to read more of your work and see your improvement as a writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hoped there would be an epilogue where Maggie and Carson would have like six kids and married. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this was an epilogue! |
![]() ![]() Just wanna say this is one of the best fanfics i've ever read. |
![]() ![]() Oh my god! This book/story is sooooo good! You shouldn’t doubt yourself, this is one of the best stories I’ve ever read! I’m so glad I found this story! I would totally read more of this! Keep up with the good work! And good luck with school and everything! |
![]() ![]() this was such a great story i loved it! u should really continue it |
![]() ![]() THIS WAS AWESOME I especially liked that once they started dating they never cheated because that is a really bad habit authors have which makes me want to barf although I did not really appreciate that Carson did cheat once but otherwise I loved how sweet this was! |
![]() ![]() Great Read! Enjoyed it a lot! |