|Reviews for Musica en la Noche|
| Hrodvitnir chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
I realize this is a whole year late for a review, but I landed on this story from your poem "Why," and I felt the need to say that this really is an amazing story. The style, the flow, the vague yet distinct story: it really is a great work of fiction.
It would be great to see you make some sort of longer story with a similar style. Not necessarily with Thou/Thy/Ye, but something longer with the same dreamy feeling. Not that there is anything particularly wrong with flash fiction, but with a larger word count, I could honestly see your work getting published in a literary magazine.
Anyways, it was a very unique read, probably the best thing I've read on FictionPress as of yet (I haven't been registered long, but I have browsed the stories for a while), and I really think you ought to know that this story is that good.