Reviews for Shadows
natmarie chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Great imagery, and some awesome word choices in there. :)
The Wandering Musician chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Good poem! I love the short stanza especially-"The night begins a lullaby/ of wind and hushed whispers/ and she sleeps at last." It almost feels like a poem in itself. I thought that the line "than the moon ever ever could" would be strengthened if you left out the second "ever". Other than that, great job!
eucalyptus chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
i appreciate the personification of the dark, and the structure in which you break between the dark creeping, and the lullaby. not too shabby