Reviews for Komae Grade School
Horch chapter 12 . 5/3/2011
Secretive Person, how can you put two chapters of another story into this story? I'm very, very disappointed in you.:'(
Secretive Person chapter 11 . 5/2/2011
I know that I am the one who wrote/ typed this story but I am here to point out my error. In the first paragraph there is a name Suzuko, it's supposed to be Zenan
Baseball Rockz chapter 9 . 4/8/2011
Most of this chapter is in dialogue form... That's odd
Anonymous Reader chapter 9 . 4/8/2011
Wow, Hikaru must be real pissed.
Horch chapter 8 . 4/7/2011
Dear Secretive Person,

I don't believe anyone can have blue hair.:

But, I like this chapter. Hikaru is awesome.:P

Hey, Nyka, I have an idea: WHY DON'T YOU MAKE HARU'S FATHER DIE AND MAKE HIKARU HARU'S OFFICIAL GUARDIAN?

Hikaru is a better guardian than Haru's father.:/

With All Due Respect,

TheMockingjay.
Anonymous Reader chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
Have the next chapter updated, NOW.
Anonymous Reader chapter 7 . 4/6/2011
Is his bodyguard going to be abusive towards Haru too?
Anonymous Reader chapter 6 . 4/6/2011
Will Haru be able to go on good terms with his teacher?
Anonymous Reader chapter 5 . 4/6/2011
This is a really short chapter, I doubt that there are more than a thousand words.
Anonymous Reader chapter 4 . 4/6/2011
You should have Haru be able to successfully run away from that monster demon of a father
Anonymous Reader chapter 3 . 4/6/2011
How can it be possible for Haru's father to drive so fast without the police arresting him and give him a traffic ticket?
Anonymous Reader chapter 2 . 4/6/2011
You could really be more specific about the mother, and also, you should introduce her to the story.
Anonymous Reader chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
How is it possible for him (Haru) to have a fever of forty-six degrees celius?
Baseball Rockz chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
You should have Haru go on the baseball team.
Secretive Person chapter 3 . 4/5/2011
Cool. I have just reviewed my own story. AWESOME!
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