Reviews for Ribbon
Hisa-Ai chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
A little vague. I was expecting a little more detail, but since it's poetry, it works as is.
The Wandering Musician chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Very interesting! This poem leaves me wanting to know more. I feel like a little more information (why the missed person isn't around now, their relation to the speaker) would really help build the emotion of the piece. Good job! I enjoyed reading it.