Reviews for Starr and Temple Detective Agency
Jave Harron chapter 9 . 7/30/2011
I did like this chapter. Robot revolution is always fun. I liked your robot con-man, a very fun character. Ultimo Robo was also pretty cool. I do hope to see both of them in the future.
Jave Harron chapter 8 . 6/26/2011
I have to say, this was a fun chapter for a number of reasons. You managed to make a Col. Kurtz style character fairly sympathetic (and cunning), you introduced a nice antagonist or villain for later, and you managed to get my interest for the whole chapter. Looking forward to more Starr and Temple adventures.
Jave Harron chapter 7 . 6/12/2011
I did like this chapter. Space Pirates fighting mutant bugs was definitely a cool idea. I look forward to more adventures with Starr and Temple, and like their various adventures around the Solar System. Will there be any more fun with the Alphans, perhaps?
Jave Harron chapter 6 . 6/6/2011
I did like this chapter a bit. You hint at some technologies that made a fun crossover possible, as well as showing another cyborg who may be a potential "love interest." This chapter actually seemed pretty cyberpunky, with a Japanese character, corrupt megacorp, and all. Still, looking forward to more!
Jave Harron chapter 4 . 4/7/2011
Okay, a few things about the chapter. A lot of the fight scenes seemed a bit too short. I do like Hypatia. Specs was a fun villain, and I did like the hints of an arcing plot involving their mother. I've noticed a bit more continuity and references to previous stories than other ones, and I think a longer project or arc would definitely be cool. I miss those from your older stories.
Jave Harron chapter 3 . 3/31/2011
Okay, a fun chapter here. I liked the 'betrayal' your character was forced through, and you set up a potential recurring antagonist. I look forward to future conflicts and stories in this here universe.
Jave Harron chapter 2 . 3/30/2011
Okay, fairly fun chapter. I did enjoy the flashbacks to the war, and those seemed fairly vividly described. Venus as a jungle world is always a pulp scifi vision I enjoy. I'm looking forwards to future stories, and more to do with the duo.
TitanWolf chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Is this an alternate universe where Starr stayed in the armny instead of becoming a Marshine runner?
Jave Harron chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Okay, I'm noticing just about all of your tropes at play here, although I can't say I disapprove (but it may just be I'm a sucker for anything in space). Cyborg detective, check. Kid sidekick, check. Hive of scum and villainy, check. Femme fatale, check. Looking forward to more of it.